So holy crap this is the first thing I've uploaded in yeeeaaars.

I'm in college now, and I took an oil painting (which I've never done before... acrylics pls) class this semester. Our last outside assignment was to do a self portrait, and this is my nearly complete product. My final review isn't until later this week, so I have time to work on it and fix things.

What I would like is some really awesome criticism.

I know that the facial proportions are fucked up, specifically the nose, which is far too long, and the eyes aren't where they should be. At this point, I'm not very concerned about the proportions, because I can't exactly fix them without redoing much the painting.

I'd like advice and criticisms on things that I CAN get done before my final review. I already know of a lot of them, but please just go all out. I'd like to get a good grade on this.

Thank you so much!

20"x24", pre-stretched canvas, oil paints.