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Submitted: September 9, 2005
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Character at [link] . Not one of mine, though XP His name is Aidan Rogan, and he's the leader of a smuggler ring in Knockturn Alley. He's neat.

His body is weird and messed up. Critiuqes are appreciated.
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=KashTheKwik:iconKashTheKwik: Sep 9, 2005, 2:53:49 PM
He's got that Aidan feel to him, but I feel like it's not so much the body, and more so the head... Tis a bit disproportionate from the body, making it feel as though two different artists went at work here...


So...

Where's Esme or Rodney ¬_¬?

lol.

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I got a real indication of a laugh coming on...
*CaribbeanBlue:iconCaribbeanBlue: Sep 9, 2005, 9:31:07 PM
Great Cross hatching Reenie.. I love cross hatchings.. :heart:

Hmmm... before I full critique.. is he supposed to be really really skinny?

It's how I imagine him myself really...
~missxmay:iconmissxmay: Sep 10, 2005, 7:36:27 PM
Expression is fantabu! I can never get it right when I try to draw him. So I normally just give up.

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Butterflies are passive agressive.
~OhSnapAdorable:iconOhSnapAdorable: Sep 11, 2005, 9:52:36 AM
Yeah, the whole huge head thing is a reacurring problem in my stuff -_- Haha

And as for my half of the trade, I'm working on it XP I've actually got an idea for something that I think would be really cute <3
~OhSnapAdorable:iconOhSnapAdorable: Sep 11, 2005, 9:53:17 AM
*nods* Yup! I think "skinny and unpleasant" is how his player describes him.
~OhSnapAdorable:iconOhSnapAdorable: Sep 11, 2005, 9:54:27 AM
*grins* Thanks, Mousie! Rock.
*CaribbeanBlue:iconCaribbeanBlue: Sep 11, 2005, 1:28:56 PM
hmmm.. yeah.. That works then.. he seems a bit skeletal but it works if he's supposed to be super skinny.. the only thing I could critique here is that he lacks depth a little.. he seems a bit flat even with the shading.. that can be cool with cross hatching like what they did with the credits of Unfortunate Events, but it has to be intentionally sytlized.. and it doens't really look like you intelntionaly stylized the flatness here.. cause certain parts look in depth and others just look kinda flat.. :hmm:

Really good over all though and I love your style.. it's very much your own. :thumbsup:
~Kileywood:iconKileywood: Sep 17, 2005, 9:18:41 PM
Here I am jealous again of you fantastic artists!!!

Aidan looks just as I picture, gangly and skinny.....His ecpression is great.
*CaribbeanBlue:iconCaribbeanBlue: Jan 5, 2006, 4:47:58 AM
(or more Miss Celeste)

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*dashes off*

I didn't say nothin'